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Essay 10. People work because they need money to live

     People work because they need money to live.What are other reasons that people work­­­­­­­? Discuss one ore more. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.

Money is important in people life.But it isn`t only enough in order to work.It can be main reason to work.However, people want to contribute to society something, joining a social environment, and sense of achievement.

As a matter of fact all people who work in society, there are many contributions to community.Some of them are doctor to save people life, some of them are teacher to teach students new things and some of them are lawyer in order to defend not guilty people.We can augment that.For example police,soldiers,constructor,managers some of that.Because helping to people there is nature of human.That`s why  for most of people education,peace,provide jobs to peple ,save people life are worthy than money.

Secondly , people want to join to social environment.Human who work has new fiends, new place.We work with them in workplace but after working we go to different place in order to activity.For example we play football, we go to theater or cinema, caffee so on.Thereby we spend enjoyable time with them. Some people don`t like be lone. They constanly be in different activities.They go to swim ,play tennis with their workmates.So they be part of society/

Finally, Human being always want to be successful in community.Thereby they wok hard.They make a lot of search to improve science. Some of them want to famous person in society.They lead a succesful life.For example some of them Einsthein, Tomas edison so on.But they didn`t work to save money.Maybe they save money any.They leave beatiful works the people behind.Their main goal wasn’t money.They lived a plain life.But today ,people are not .That is, succesful people generaly save a good money.

It can be say that ,people don’t work only to save money.There are different targets.Like helping people , joınıng social and to contibute somethıng to societ.


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